A2, white conte crayon on black paper
My last monochrome exercise in my weekly art class. Next week I get to use colour!
This done from a photograph with the added challenge of adjusting the light values of the original photo – rather like with the previous cow exercise – I’m learning to add something, to make the subject my own.
I’ve learnt a great deal in these strict art classes and if I look back at my first exercises eight months ago I can see how much confidence I’ve gained. Initially my marks were tentative, regular, they weren’t saying much. I’m more free now (though still have some way to go!) and able to put more emotion in to those marks. Even within this one drawing I can see the difference between the tentative first marks and the ones made in the past 30 minutes of drawing.
Specifically I learnt:
- don’t be tempted to assume that leaving areas black will give more atmosphere – when I added the gentlest of marks in to the black it created more interest – there IS something going on in that dense shadow.
- don’t be tempted to do a perfect drawing before getting going with the tonal work – this is more about ‘sculpting’ an image out of the black – and that’s where the joy comes too. I was surprised at how much easier this was that I was expecting – and how little I used a rubber – I think just once to get rid of an early line of placement.
Yay! I get to use a third colour at my very strict art class – sanguine (a dark and a light) – used above alongside white conte, white chalk and charcoal on A2 peachy coloured paper.
I never get excited by working from photographs – it seems to be missing the point of drawing somehow – but I learnt a lot from this in terms of the media but perhaps more importantly that it’s possible to add to what the photograph is already saying.
This feels like quite an old-fashioned subject handled in an old-fashioned way, but nevertheless I like my cow – just hope he’s saying ‘moo’ and not ‘meh’.
What I learned:
- As with the grey paper in the last exercise, I have to remind myself to leave the coloured paper as the mid-tone – and resist temptation to cover it up all the time.
- Working from a black and white photograph it seemed impossible to invent colour, but once I realised I was drawing my cow, and not the one in the photograph, it became far easier.
- Likewise with the texture and shadows, I had to forget trying to understand what was going on in the photograph and think about being up close to the real thing, where the coat would be tufty, where it would be smooth, the bulge of the eye socket, the cup of the ears.
- To get the shadow on the white – a very light layer of white followed by a light touch with the charcoal. To get the smooth areas around nostrils – white down first, then sanguine and a little smudging.
I started these very classic art classes in November, moving gradually from HB pencil to charcoal and finally to charcoal AND white conté crayon. Hurrah!
What I learned:
- the grey paper is the mid-tone – it’s quite hard to use it as mid-tone – to just let it be
- work with charcoal and grey paper first. Add white last.
- blending the charcoal and white makes a flat grey – avoid!
- however it is possible to go over the charcoal with the crayon to some extent (with a sharp tip)
- don’t be frightened to go in quite bold – laying down a lot of charcoal – it can always be taken away
- don’t bother with a very detailed drawing – you are sculpting the drawing from the charcoal
I’ve got in to this over-subscribed life class more times than I’ve been turned away now, beginning to feel more adopted and less gate-crasher.
Two more sketches of the same pose as last week, from different angles.
I spent almost the entire time trying to get the slight twist and sag in the torso. The model’s weight was on her left hand and it was a struggle for her, she was moving about quite a bit. I’m still not convinced. I gave the leg and foot much less attention – not sure they are big enough – same old story – I did measure up but considering the leg is coming this way, it does look small.
Similar struggle here – the arm with weight on it. I hate to blame a fidgety model but it was really hard to get the position of arm against torso right. She was holding the pose for long periods on account of the oil painters in the room and it was clearly tough.
In hindsight I probably should have kept all my lines in place – from the different positions she took – it may have made for a more satisfying sketch than this with its tentative sausage of an arm.
Ok so last week I was left at the door and didn’t get in but this week yay! I got in, though being on the B-list I take the last seat, in this case right behind the model. Which was OK, but there was very little nuance of light and shadow, she was essentially all shadow. Two identical poses of 25 minutes – I’ve put the better of the two here.
Charcoal on A2
What I learnt:
- the back was in one tone of shadow – I could barely make out a spine, let alone shoulder blades – and without them I found it difficult to ‘feel’ my way around the shoulder attachment. It took a great deal of time to get this in place.
- the area viewed under the arm is a tangle of thigh, knee and arm. I think I should have simplified and suggested rather than trying to depict what was going on
- the hand! It’s not great, but at least it’s there – I’ve learn that it’s best to put down the blocks of the hand, almost like the hand is wearing a mitten – rather than going straight in with fingers.
- i have a tendency to go too small with hands, feet and head, but I think I am finally all in proportion here.
This drawing lacks interest and expression, but I went in determined to get it ‘right’. I was also quite anxious – I’m the English woman who stands at the door with a stupid grin on her face hoping to get in – I need to get over this.
Next week I know I have a place while someone is on holiday, it’s the same model in the same pose (there are oil painters in the class). Now I know I can pretty much get an accurate body on the page, I am determined to loosen up. Determined is probably the wrong approach – maybe ready? I am ready to loosen up.
What I had called my ‘back to basics’ art class is now getting more serious so it’s become my ‘very strict art class’. I’m done with finding the axis of pears and drawing the outline of teapots. Today I did my last still life in pencil. Next week it’s landscape in charcoal, quite a leap but good timing for part three: expanse.
pencil HB, 2B and 6B on paper
This was a culmination of the past several weeks of study: axis, form, tone, texture. For the first time I went in to this with some confidence, got the composition down fairly quickly, worked quickly to create form. I struggled a little with the shell – getting the pattern and shine across on what is essentially a very dark, almost black object. The horizontal line of the table against the wall isn’t right but I can fix that. Best of all I felt I knew what I was doing – progress!
pencil followed by white and black crayon on red paper.
25 minutes of which most was spent trying to get the lower leg and feet right. This is always my problem area (that and faces…and hands…) I let them tail off into nothing – this time I measured and measured and think they are in proportion. The next struggle will be to get them looking three-dimensional.
pencil then red and white crayon on grey paper
25 minutes again. I wasn’t thinking about time and I’ve run out – really evident under the thighs – I wish I had fixed the shadows here so she doesn’t look like she is hovering. I also avoided the right hand.
pencil then white pastel and black on grey paper
25 minutes and I ran out of time – the head and upper body are far from done – and I think the head needs to be a tad bigger. I also think the white pastel is a bit of a mistake. This looks like a woman turned to stone – though perhaps I can take some out now if the fixative wasn’t too strong. I’ve been too heavy handed with it especially on the hip and thigh which doesn’t help with the perspective.
The first ten minutes sketch, though the model continued to stand pretty much in place so I got more time to try and fix those lower legs and feet. I think I am beginning to see what needs to happen with the feet:
- get them sized correctly – surprisingly long
- get the angles that join the calf to foot down correctly – there is a certain width at this point and a couple of angles.
- think of the bones that make them up
- consider adding toes