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part two: project three: at home

exercise two: composition – an interior


I had already done the research on interiors before I began these exercises and though I didn’t use the following works in my research piece, they had stuck in my mind.

Giacometti’s Interior, 1949 is oil on canvas though it looks like pastels or chalks  with maybe diluted white paint over the top – everything smudging his original charcoal lines. I love the ghostliness of this. I’ve seen some of Giacometti’s sketches and saw how he erased lines out – and in doing so brought in light. He seems to have done the same with white here – bringing light to the foreground and highlights.

Interior 1949 by Alberto Giacometti 1901-1966

Interior 1949 Alberto Giacometti 1901-1966 Purchased 1949

There’s a sense of mystery – what people occupy this space? Has it been abandoned, suddenly, will they be back tomorrow. Does someone live here, years of clutter building up around them slowly, the windows blocked in? Actually I think it is Giacometti’s interior, looking at the Tate website it seems to have been called Interno dello Studio at some point. This doesn’t detract from its mystery, maybe it adds to it. I can’t help but think of the energy he unleashed here, yet for now it is calm, at rest.

Still one of my favourite albums! Before I digress…this album cover came to mind as I was thinking about interiors, and happily when I looked into it I found that the original image sits in some glory at SFMOMA. It is a photograph (transparency over magazine illustration) by Joanne Leonard from 1971.

Suede Dog Man Star

Album artwork uses photograph Sad Dreams on Cold Mornings, 1971, Joanne Leonard

I find it so beautiful, sad, haunting, dreamlike. The curtain of trees has encroached over the entire image – mirror, walls, bed – everywhere except the body. I’m intrigued by the way the image uses layers to play with space and dimension.

I discovered artist Mamma Anderson for the first time researching interiors.  I wonder why she chose  the title Room under the influence – it’s definitely a statement, unlike Giacometti’s ‘Interior’. I like to think the room is in some kind of ‘altered state’, though it may be that she is referring more directly to something with that title – music? play? andersson_roomundertheinfluence

The room looks like a theatre set, waiting for its actors to appear and occupy its space. Or maybe a room in a doll’s house – with front walls and ceiling removed. Sandwiched between two strips of unreadable darkness, the room sits under the glare of an undeclared light. Whoever occupies this room will most definitely be on display, watched, whether they like it or not.

I’m also interested in the colours she uses.  A minty green and pastel pink sing out sugary sweet from the drab. It’s unexpected and yet it doesn’t shout out.

(Added note: Ok so maybe I should have checked this first, but it seems Anderson did take a theatre set as her inspiration – Stockholm’s Royal Dramatic Theatre)

The final image that has caught my eye is more exterior, though bombs have blasted walls away to expose the interior. I like this for the lighting, for the menacing sky, for the colours and the simplicity of it. Piper had been sent to record the bomb damage in Bath and while this feels quite ‘architectural’ he has still got across the savagery of war in the light of fire and the dark of the cloud.

Somerset Place, Bath 1942 by John Piper 1903-1992

Somerset Place, Bath 1942 John Piper 1903-1992 Presented by the War Artists Advisory Committee 1946

Only once I had printed these images out did I see what a limited palette I had found myself. I’m not sure why this is, why these appealed. The colours are faded, tired, melancholic even. Perhaps they suggest that they were once brighter and that in itself speaks of time passing, of past inhabitants.

exercise 2: composition – an interior


These colours were clearly speaking to me, so I mixed them up myself and painted the pages of my sketchbook – quite randomly – before carrying on with my sketches as part of this exercise. I’m using a separate sketchbook for the interior exercises – a thin book of blank pages I found lying about. Some of the pages, but not all, are very rough – a bit like the reverse of wallpaper – and I really like the effect this gives. If I can find something like this in A1/2 I will use it for the final piece.

I used acrylic (for now I’ve just got the 3 primary colours, black and white), applied them with quite a dry brush, and following Giacometti’s lead I pushed some dry white acrylic over the top in areas. I wasn’t thinking about my interiors, I just wanted to cover the pages. I’ve drawn in with a mix of charcoal pencil, rollerball pen and a conte crayon.


I used a simple black pen to go over the chandelier and I like the inky density it’s given.


This is my final sketch in which I really worked out how to fit everything in. It involved a lot of holding pencils up to measure. And learning about foreshortening. Areas that I thought were large taking up very little space.

Now I feel like I’ve bitten off more than I can chew if this is to be A1/A2 size. I’ve got that sense of dread I get when I decide to clear out the shed, empty everything on the grass and then realise I have to get it all back in again. I’ve come this far, there’s no turning back.

The view is through a mirror on the mantelpiece. I’m hoping the dark shadow right under the edge of the frame will explain this, if it doesn’t, I’ll have to see if it actually matters. I don’t know whether to keep the peculiar white leather 1970s sofa in or not. It’ll be unrecognisable, though I think it will give more feeling of a room continuing than if I shunt it out of the way.

This makes me wonder about how much sense things need to make. I’m not bothered if the mirror doesn’t make sense – it was my view into another room – the door is opening on to another room – there is another room through the door behind me. The frame can become whatever the viewer needs it to be – wall, divider, another picture entirely – as long as it creates a question. Who is looking in?  Who has been here, who is leaving? But perhaps the odd shape of the retro sofa if unrecognisable won’t be anything for anyone,

img_1864I’ve made a stupid beginner’s mistake, despite the warning in the course handbook about set up – I stood right up close to the mirror, balancing my sketchbook on the narrow mantelpiece. Now I have to manage A1/A2 in the same space.

I’m pretty sure I want to do this with charcoal and ink rollerball on paint washes, but do I start on coloured paper? As the walls are painted dark grey, I’m wondering if I should be working out of the dark? New things to try, running out of time again…

In the end the only paper my nearest art shop stocked bigger than A2 was white, so white it is, but I will colour it first.



Well I’ve got to the point where I feel I am out of love with the drawing and going through the process. I am already thinking about the next project – Assignment Two. Obviously I’ll keep going, I need to see if I can salvage anything. Once more it feels like lack of time has meant I am learning by my mistakes on the drawings themselves, rather than in the preparation. I tell myself I am a student and have been doing this just over a year, it’s OK, it is all the learning process. But faced with a huge sheet of A1 and half of it yet to cover…!

Problems encountered: I wanted to work with pencil, to keep the idea of simple back to basics drawing, however a combination of working on A1 and wanting huge areas of deepest shadow means charcoal gets involved. Next to the charcoal pencil looks silvery grey and has a shine I wasn’t expecting. I can’t dull the pencil with charcoal – the charcoal just slides off.

*I’ve come back to this after a two week break. Not ideal but I was in a different place, where I completed Assignment 2. And now I need to finish this. Looking at it after the break I’ve rekindled a little love for it. There are parts that work for me – essentially the sense of a corner lit up.

Problems I see at this stage:

  • This looks like two drawings – split down the middle – but with no connection between the two. Is that a problem? I’m not sure I’ll know until I’ve completed the foreground to the right.
  • The lack of nuance in the blackness of the middle window and wall behind the cupboard. I don’t know now why I went so uniformly black. I think I was after that denseness of shadow that feels solid.
  • I worked so hard to get the perspective right but there are some big problems, especially with the middle window – it looks like it is popping forward, rather than running flush to the wall. I set myself up for problems with this drawing – it is essentially too wide to see at once – it includes everything in my periphery vision. I know that artists have managed this successfully, I’m not sure I have here.

I need to get on. I’m looking forward to the chandelier, I love its bold shapes, and I think it will bring some drama to the image. Not, however looking forward to capturing the 1970s white leather sofa!


final drawing (A1)

What I think works:

  • the left of the drawing – the open door, the sconce. I like the creepiness of that open door and the glare around the light.
  • to the right of the drawing, the lamp and its reflection in the glass door of the wardrobe

What doesn’t work:

  • the middle section of the drawing. I’m tempted to cut this piece out and join the remaining sections together
  • the perspective was so tough as I was drawing while panning around me. I thought I could capture the very slightly open doors of the wardrobe but it hasn’t really worked.
  • media: I found the charcoal really troublesome, sliding around on the paper and becoming hard to control, even with repeated sprays of fixative. I also found the pencil disappointing – quickly going a shiny grey.

What I’ve learnt:

Overall I think I was a little ambitious with this drawing given the time I allowed myself. I should spend more time in preparatory stages – really investigating how the media will work, and ensuring the drawing is as I want it before getting started.

Final thought: does it work better as two separate drawings?



part two: project three: at home

exercise one: quick sketches around the house



I live part of my week in the historic centre of Aix-en-Provence. The apartment is ancient, eccentric and crumbling, with scary cracks, falling plaster and balconies that can only hold the weight of one pigeon at a time. But it’s also beautiful and elegant, and crammed full of ghosts from Aix’s noble past.


The ceilings are incredibly high, windows are full length and mirrored doors divide rooms.











My favourite view is from the sofa looking up into the mantelpiece mirror and seeing the crazy chandelier and a further reflection in a mirrored door. This hasn’t come across here – it feels like an impossible feat of draughtsmanship to get that tunnel of mirrors onto a sketchbook page.

It’s been very tricky fitting floor to ceiling in one picture. I start out with good intentions and soon run out of room for my room. Focusing on one part seems to be the answer. I  like the intrigue of this corner of the floor  – it’s shouting out – “it’s there! can’t you see it? the thing is right there!”

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Looking up in the same corner is less interesting. The lamp makes extravagant shadows but that’s about it. The doorway into the hall, sketched from a chair – I think this sketch worked quite well – there’s an intrigue – the door leads to a corridor with more doors – light floods out of them, the hall itself is dark. Who has opened the door?


The problem I’m having with this exercise is that I live between two places – I’m just getting into the rhythm of Aix and I go scuttling back to the countryside.

These three sketches are the same room, done perched on the back of the sofa. fullsizeoutput_d2eThe armchair corner is my favourite spot in the house, but I think drawing a wall full of art will be problematic – I need to see how/if other artists have tackled this. My perspective on the bottom picture right wall has gone a bit awry…

The viewpoint with the guitar has become all about the guitar. Ceilings are high here too, I need to pull back to give the eye somewhere else to look. fullsizeoutput_d2dSo I think the most successful of these is the view of stairs that lead off the room.






part two: project two: still life

exercise four: monochrome

I had a crisis of confidence over the previous exercise and it seems to be carrying on into this one. I feel like I am not really drawing, or learning how to draw. Instead I’m struggling with new media (coloured pencils, crayons, inks, paint) and as a distance learner it’s frustrating.

This exercise is all about colour and I’ve decided on pastels – at this stage all ways of applying colour are new to me – but as pastels feel like charcoal’s cousin, pastels is it.

The exercise also asking for: tone, texture, pattern, detail, contrast.


img_1618My subject is a grenadine on a red metal chair.

I’ve been trying out the reds and not really enjoying the effect of the pastel. My objects are strong shapes and the pastels seem a bit fuzzy. I’m also struggling with the paper in my sketchbook – a second layer of pastel doesn’t stick, it just glides off the first layer and the pastel pencils make no impact at all.

In my box of pastels I did find a sample of  ‘la carte pastel’. I’ve never come across this before – it is as coarse as sandpaper – and the pastel works brilliantly on it. Unfortunately I can’t get hold of it locally so I’m sticking with plain old paper for now.

I chose grey paper for this. I don’t know why, it wasn’t really thought through, it hasn’t really contributed but hasn’t caused any problems either.

I’ve had big problems here with the pastels and pastel pencils themselves. Each pastel seems to behave differently. The brown is smooth and creamy, the purple is scratchy and seems to rub away whatever I’ve already laid down. The pastel pencils just scratch at the paper rather than lay any actual colour down. It’s been tricky!

I wonder if maybe pastels are simple not the right medium for this style of drawing. Maybe they would be better for something for expressive.


Things I’m happy with:

  • the shine on the metal chair
  • the sense of light under the chair

Things I’m not happy with:

  • the  direction of the light is not clear – I actually had the light coming up from under the chair, through the holes.
  • the holes are all over the place! not even in shape or colour – this was one of my struggles with the chubby pastels. I went over and over them, in the end nothing stuck – pastel or pencil.
  • the colours – the red of the fruit and the chair were very very close. I think perhaps I should have created more of a difference between them. The shadow is quite violet – I’ve actually got the colour pretty accurate but it’s not really an appealing colour – perhaps I should’ve made it bluer? (I had propped a piece of white card behind the chair.

What I’ve learned from this exercise in particular:

  • I need to have a more precise plan before I start on the final piece – with this I hadn’t really worked out how to manage the holes in the chair. I also hadn’t decided what my crop would be – and was frequently adjusting it as I worked. And even though I had tried out the reds in pastels before hand, I didn’t use what I had discovered in the final – I just jumped in and didn’t refer back to my tests.
  • I probably need to be more careful with choice of paper – I’m not sure this was that good for pastels.

Research Point: Contemporary artists who make interiors their subject

Trying to research this made me laugh – what on earth is the Google search term for paintings of interiors by contemporary artists that doesn’t lead you to pages and pages of home decoration – it’s a Farrow&Ball minefield!

So I started with what I knew, and it took me on a happy trail of discovery:

I have an old postcard of a watercolour by Elizabeth Blackadder, of a cat and pot plants. If anyone said they had bought me a painting of a cat and pot plants I would shudder and think Hallmark. But Elizabeth Blackadder’s paintings are wonderfully off-kilter. I discovered that her visits to Japan had inspired paintings of interiors and while I didn’t find these works very interesting (and I’m guessing they are no longer ‘contemporary’) she did lead me to the interiors of Jonas Wood, via his ‘Clipping’, 2013.


Alex’s room, 2009, Jonas Wood

I don’t know how I feel about these paintings. As always, it would be nice to see them in the flesh. Online they look like they’ve been done with a painting app – the colours are so solid – I can’t see any brushwork though they he uses oil and acrylic on canvas.


Interior with Fireplace, 2012, Jonas Wood

The perspective can be a bit quirky,  but just about everything I looked at during this research had perspective that was a little off, and its flattening effect is beginning to feel contrived. All in all they feel a bit fashionable, a bit like artwork I might buy in IKEA. They leave me cold.

I’m interested that Jonas Wood has painted some of his works outside – on the facade of a building, on the highline in NY and on a roadside billboard. This makes me think about  houses turned inside out – the awful fascination of a semi-demolished house – where wallpaper is left flapping in the breeze. However he hasn’t really painted interiors on exteriors – these are rows of his pot plants and I can’t help but feel it’s more publicity than art.

I’ve added this Interview with Jonas Wood, Hyperallergic, Sept 2015  for my own reference. In it he discusses his working methods and influences.


Jonas Woods leads me to Carolyn Swisczc who also paints domestic interiors though it is her public spaces I prefer. She caught my attention because of Hallway.


Hallway, Carolyn Swisczc

Living in France means my trips home involve a fair amount of Premier Inn (and Travelodge on a bad day) and I find hotel hallways intensely intriguing. It is all about the carpet! This carpet has a hallucinatory effect. It looks as though it’s moving, as if it’s been painted on water. It could even be alive. And these hallways can have a giddy effect – narrow, low ceilings, endless – you can lose a sense of perspective within them. The endless repetition of door and pattern. Those doors are so subtle – a shadow and a handle – and of course we do try to ignore all those other doors, we blank them out. We blank out the fact that we are sleeping just feet away from strangers. In the morning we step out of those discreet doors and hit the crazy carpet to the breakfast buffet.


Whitney Museum Lobby, 2011, Carolyn Swisczc

In Whitney Museum Lobby the artist focus is again on repetition of pattern, the artificial light, the oppressive dimensions – here a ceiling that descends to meet a rising floor. I would have been much happier if the figures had been left out. They have taken the image from something that could have been quite menacing to something more cutesy – maybe more illustrative? And again there is that lack of perspective to the floor and security ropes – flattening it out – though interestingly she seems to have done this by not altering he texture of the carpet as it recedes. It looks like a cut-out add on, or a computer-generated piece of art.

These two artists remind me of an exhibition I saw a couple of years ago in a St Ives gallery.  Charlotte Keats brings the exterior into her interiors and vice versa. As a result I get a real sense of endless space from them. Space is never enclosed, we can inhabit more than one room, we can be inside and outside at the same time.


Charlotte Keats

Keats really toys with the idea of interiors: stairways and swimming pools enter and exit, you can’t be sure if there is a ceiling over your head or not. Objects have no form – perspective is supplied through strong architectural lines, and good luck trying to find a vanishing point on the horizon.


Charlotte Keats


Charlotte Keats

Keats uses a consistent palette of beige, pinks and turquoise and all her works are punctuated by strong vertical lines – architectural support or tree trunk – again giving the idea of blending in and out. This tree has roots, this one made a house…

These three artists (to my amateur eye) all seem to have a Hockney accent and a 1970s aesthetic. There are pot plants, and quirky angles, furniture with skinny legs, the colours of California. The colours are applied flatly, there is little texture, objects lack form, there are few shadows. This makes me wonder about paintings of interiors – I suppose they will always represent the fashion of interiors of the time, and our love of retro doesn’t seem to be fading any time soon. We will always be able to date a painting by the fashion in it – be that clothes, hairstyle or interiors Perhaps only landscapes can escape this?

They are also about the room and its objects – the decor, the colour, the furniture. I am not left wondering who lives in these spaces. I think about architecture and lifestyle.


Beverly Hills Housewife, 1966-1967, David Hockney


Reading an interview with Charlotte Keats led me to one of her favourite artists, someone I had never heard of, and whom I am so delighted to discover.


Tick Tock, 2011, Mamma Anderson

Mamma Andersson’s work seems to come from a different place – these images are about what has happened in the room, not about the room itself. I have so many questions. Firstly I’d love to know how she went about this one. It looks as if she has worked from a photograph, I’m not sure why. And there seem to be elements of collage? Then there are the mysterious marks – the blurred spots in the foreground (on the lens?) and the smudges to the left. Something strange is behind the pillows, spilling on to the bed. It’s so full of the routine of daily life – a shirt hung up on a makeshift line, two coffee cups, a newspaper, a half-dead pot plant and yet there are these strange shapes – shape-shifters perhaps? Behind the white shirt is a dark coat hanging – but is it actually hanging? I love how she has somehow managed to create this world of the utterly normal it’s almost drab, and infused it with an other-worldliness.


Leftovers, 2006, Mamma Andersson

More questions. Are these different rooms mixed up with each other – kitchen, hallway, bathroom, living room, bedroom? Is the woman the same – living out her daily rituals. Or is this one big studio the night after? Two people are on makeshift beds, still asleep. Are they memories, are they for real? The blackness is striking – the dense night outside the window, the huge black wall, with an office notice board attached. Is this an amalgamation of all the rooms this woman occupies – work, her friend’s flat?  Not everything can be explained, there are unidentifiable items. But there is also a roll of loo paper on the back of the loo, a neat brass lamp and a shampoo bottle with its label showing. It’s as if Mamma Anderson has walked around this scene saying ‘this, you can know what it is, but not this’. The real mystery of course is the figure to the right who has pulled the short straw and is sleeping on the floor. Andersson can clearly draw, so we are left wondering why this poor sod is so contorted.

Pierre Bergian is one of a number of contemporary artists I found that paints empty interiors. He uses a limited palette and gentle light. While we often think of rooms as having ghostly presence, his rooms themselves are ghostly. Doors appear to be part of the walls, furniture is barely there. The occasional coloured wall panel seems to vibrate as if it’s the only piece of the house that is real, the rest is dissolving and soon will be barely there.


Matteo Massagrande

Matteo Massagrande does something quite different with his abandoned interiors. He searches out abandoned houses and paints them quite realistically, though often with a  dose of added romance. His interiors are quite real, but full of the past. They are romantic and they are beautiful. Sneaking in to abandoned houses is part of so many childhoods. We are endlessly fascinated by the blend of nostalgia, secrets and sadness – faded beauty with a sinister overlay.

The work above reminds me of an abandoned building I visited just last week – cloisters that had since become a college and now lies waiting to learn of its future. The image above is another building that has seen changes,  probably municipal use followed a grander past.

With extraordinary attention to detail – to rust, flaking and peeling – he gets across the many layers these old buildings have – the many lives they’ve seen, roles they’ve played.


Matteo Massagrande

Like the work I selected first, these paintings of abandoned interiors also seem to be following a trend. There is a huge appetite for images of abandoned places – from funfairs to tube stops, hospitals to theatres – and of course the extraordinarily moving images of Detroit. So much so that it has earned the term ‘ruin photography’ and even ‘ruin porn’ – as dilapidated buildings become fetishised.

part two: project two:still life

exercise three: experiment with mixed media

Feeling a bit ambivalent about mixed media. I’m comfortable with a pencil and charcoal, becoming friends with ink but I didn’t really hit it off with coloured pencils in the last exercise. Now I’m to throw in wax crayons, felt tips, marker pens…

I’ve chosen some ridiculous decorative fish as my subject.

I started out with biro, wax crayons and pencils but found that a mix of coloured ink and felt pens had the intensity of colour and smoothness of these slippery marvels that I was after.

I had the fish on a piece of crazy 1960s fabric but it was competing too hard for attention.  Their original home was in Cannes, right on the coast, and as an Englishwoman away from home, this naturally had me thinking about fish and chips.

Wrapping the fish in newspaper seems the right thing to do. The fish have a touch of sadness to them, having seen the inside of newspaper before; wrapped up and left behind.

Drawing them on newspaper has been problematic. Online research advised priming the paper with gesso but this has dulled the coloured inks and they don’t flow as easily. (I’m using pink and yellow to blend into orange).  A wash of watercolour helps restore the colour but it lacks the gorgeous intensity of the inks on plain white paper.

I’m also slightly bothered that the fish look like they are breaking out of the newspaper rather than wrapped up in it.

I decided to try a more conventional approach and put my fish on fabric but it all looks a bit dull and I’m irritated that the newspaper idea didn’t work out.


I’ve decided on a different tack: Because of the problems I had with the ink losing its vibrancy on newsprint (theoca forum was very helpful on this issue, but I couldn’t find what was needed in the nearest shop), I’ve kept the fish on the plain white cartridge and added the newspaper around.  I am worried that this will end up looking a bit ‘craftsy’ but I needed to get on with the project with what I had to hand.



So they they are: the ridiculous fish

Things I’m happy with:

  • I’m reasonably happy with the use of newspaper. It does seem to add instant interest and texture to the fabric.
  • I’m happy that I’ve let the fabric fade out at the edges – my tendency is to go even all over – this is something I’ve been consciously thinking about.
  • I’ve met the brief by using mixed media: newspaper, coloured pencil, felt tips, coloured inks.

Things I’m not happy with:

  • I don’t really like any of it, though I’m pleased to have tried out the newspaper. At the beginning I was motivated by the fish. Though ridiculous, they are quite satisfying objects, but I think putting them on their own as the star of the show has made them more serious somehow. They’ve lost their quirkiness.
  • It feels crafty and a bit school project. My lighting was quite flat and I think this is part of the problem. If I had created something more dramatic – so the fish could gleam out from the darkness – it may have looked more sophisticated?
  • The fish don’t look that solid, and they are not really sitting in that fabric (though the shadow under the forward fish has worked OK, the other tail was off the fabric and seems to be floating – I think I should have cheated a shadow maybe)

When I look back at the preparatory work I can see how much I have tightened up in the final piece. I prefer my looser ink-splotchy fish of my sketchbook, they have more spontaneity. Not really sure how to get around this, once a certain amount of work has gone in to a drawing, it’s hard not to be bothered about messing it up.

Some time later….As I look at this again, at a later stage, I realise a couple of things I can do to improve the image: the lower lip of the fish is wrong, but more importantly in the sketches I had the fish appearing out of the fabric, but somehow in this final version I became obsessed with having the shadow of the underside of the fish show. If I have the perseverance I will see if I can fix these mistakes with added newspaper.


Ridiculous fish revisited: the joy of mixed media like this is I could fix my problem areas by gluing more newspaper on, however it did create problems with the surface and I’m not sure why. I glued more newspaper, added coat of gesso as before, and the surface became super slippery, not allowing the coloured pencil to stick.

I haven’t done a great job here, the material looks weirdly bunched up, but it was tricky to alter the small area to fit in with the fabric already down.

I’ve been thinking about how I can prevent these kind of mistakes in the future. I don’t know why I became blinded to the composition by my obsession with the shadow under the fish. I suppose I was so determined to make sure it sat properly. Ideally of course I would do more preparatory sketches, but the idea of adding fabric on newspaper came late in the day and my time was up. I hope that each experience will alert me to possible stumbling blocks, and next time I’ll be ready.

part two: project two: still life

exercise two: still life in tone using colour

I struggled to find the enthusiasm for this exercise. I went into it happily enough, reading up on colour theory and getting used to using colour pencils in my sketchbook. When it came to putting coloured pencil to paper however, nothing very exciting happened. I spent what felt like hours scratching away at the paper, at risk of tendonitis. I’m not sure if the results are disappointing because I’ve chosen unexciting colours or I simply haven’t applied enough colour – though adding more colour seemed to deaden everything further.

On the whole this is probably just testimony to my inexperience with colour…and I’m hoping things can only get better!


I had two or three goes at the above – all ended up in the bin – but I stuck it out with this one.

Things I’m happy with:

  • the shadows: I had stolen my boy’s reading light and got some dramatic shadows, unfortunately when he reclaimed it I found it impossible to replicate but I had enough to go on and I think they’ve worked out well, even if they’re not entirely accurate.
  • the two objects on the left seem to have form
  • there is a sense of strong light coming in from the right

Things I’m not happy with:

  • the colours – especially the green – makes me feel slightly ill
  • the tall vase, which in reality is a very odd shape, doesn’t look very solid. It’s relationship to the other two objects is not clear.
  • I had put the objects on a chess box butted up against a piece of cardboard on the wall. Because the chessboard was in quite dark woods I wasn’t really sure how to handle this – the dark colour, but the bright light.
  • the whole is timid and unsure

Frustrated I decided to try smaller versions in different styles and colours. Yes I realise I should possibly have done this first but I thought the messing about I’d done in my sketchbook would be enough.


I had read about blenders, so bought one and I think by my fourth try I understood what it could be used for – actually blending colours together (duh!) so I am beginning to see what could happen. I still think my choice of colours is suspect but I have been fired up by my visit to the Camoin exhibition with all those gorgeous oranges and lilacs sitting happily together.

One exciting thing has happened here though. From my last feedback I want to work on not always having an ‘edge’ to objects, I’ve been trying to give variation to my line and let things ‘tail off’ though somehow my heavy hand always forgets this. In the top right however, I suddenly found myself with no edges to my objects, none at all, and I really like the effect – my objects are bathed in light.

part two: project two: still life

exercise one: still life using line


I came into this exercise with not much of an idea but it quickly took some shape. I had an urge to sketch shoes – they have so many lovely lines and curves pushed into shape by feet while the laces are always breaking free. I sketched the shoes just where they were, on an ancient terracotta floor.

What intrigued me most was how the lines of the shoe could slip in and out of the honeycomb pattern of the floor. This tiled floor holds the ghosts of so many footprints and when we move on, when my boys grow out of their shoes, something of their footprint will be left. Day after day their feet tapping, slipping, pushing into these tiles. The way ancient stone steps dip in the middle has always delighted me and though this floor doesn’t dip and sag (though some tiles are cracked and chipped) it has held the weight of many.


I’ve tried a few different options in pencil and ink and as I do so I realise that it will take some planning to integrate the lines of shoes and floor. Ideally I want to work straight in ink rather than pencil first. I notice a real difference in line if I go direct into ink rather than tracing over a pencil line.


My delighted youngest made these prints – standing in charcoal and then on the page. I sketched the shoes on top – looking for a feeling of the footprint escaping the shoe.


I’m so happy with how the detail of the footprint has come out and the echo of lines I have made on the shoe.



Messing around with more textures, using diluted ink and dabbing charcoal over the top.


Composition (paves), Jean Planque

Today I popped in to our local gallery which holds the collection of Jean Plaque, himself an artist. This tiny watercolour came to mind later on when I was thinking about my terracotta floor, and inspired me to add colour.


I think this will be my final version for this exercise. I’m not absolutely sure. I’m still interested in the idea of ghostly footprints across the tiles.

Things I think have worked:

  • I’ve met most of the requirements of the exercise: thinking about how the objects relate to the background, concentrating on pattern, shape, line. I haven’t captured texture though, except perhaps the slipperiness of the smooth floor and the rubber of the soles. And if I’ve understood correctly what it is to tackle an exercise conceptually as well as practically, I think I’ve also done that.
  • I wanted a ghostly quality to the shoe, the feeling that they were being incorporated into the tile – yet another footprint passing through – and I think I’m almost there.
  • the dissolving of line – tile and shoe – the interchange.
  • the wateriness of the tile that adds to the feeling of the two elements merging.

Things I don’t think have worked so well:

  • I find the colours a bit garish and unfortunately I think it looks a little like blood stain. I should maybe be bolder with the terracotta colour, to make it clear that this is the colour of the entire floor.
  • the composition. I tried various combinations of shoes. All the way along this line of four, pulled in opposite directions by the straying laces, seemed best. But in this  final version it feels a bit unsettled. I may try cropping in closer.
  • as mentioned already, I haven’t got across texture though there wasn’t a great deal of texture – things I have missed are the canvas of the shoes and areas where they were fraying.
  • the drawings feel a bit cartoon like.

The project asks specifically:

‘did you manage to get a sense of depth in your drawings?’ Well no, I didn’t really. I was purposefully playing with perspective to meet my ideas of the floor and shoes blending together. Despite that I do think the shoes standing upright have still managed to retain some depth.

‘what difficulties were created by being restricted to line or tone?’ It did take some discipline to resist from shading too much. I did throw an earlier version out because I felt that line was being lost in the hodgepodge of cross-hatching. My doubts about keeping to line only are that as I mentioned above, it does have a cartoon type quality – I think this is also because I’ve used my line quite sparingly, without adding marks for texture or expression.